Thanks! I absolutely LOVE Jim Dale, and my usual writing is HP (he narrates the US version of the books), so I think that helped a lot.

I hope I didn't sound defensive--I really did think I had it right, but the more I thought about it (which, incidentally, was after I hit 'post comment' argh), the more I realized that everything was dead first--even the strawberry.

Well, at least I didn't write a whole lot of incorrect stuff, anyway! Thanks for your help, I do appreciate it; I'm a perfectionist, so finding out I was wrong didn't sit well at first, sorry :)