ext_3550 ([identity profile] vida-boheme.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] darsynia 2008-04-29 08:30 pm (UTC)

Pitch perfect dialogue <3 I especially loved the opening with Rodney wanting the security of sleeping in John's bed, but still having the urge to hide away. It flags up the newness of the relationship - that they are still finding their way - nicely echoed in John's comment and then Rodney's misunderstanding.

It's warm and natural and i love it. Did you say you were doing Bigbang this year? *Excited*

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