Ooohhh...very intense. The beginnning? When Rodney was so confused and seeing things that the others weren't...so, so scary. I was so scared for him, but I was still scared that maybe he was right and it was the rest of them that were wrong. As I read, it felt like I was trying to stand on a surface that kept shifting under me...it was very unsettling. Well done.
John on a mission to find out what was going wrong with Rodney was awesome. I love protective!John with a mission. *hugs him* His fear for Rodney (when he finally finds out what's going on) was very realistic. It read like a good ep. *hugs you*
Rodney's choice of his biggest, non-lethal fear? Perfect. Oh...poor Rodney. I think that John will really have his work cut out for him, now. ;)
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Date: 2008-06-01 09:37 pm (UTC)John on a mission to find out what was going wrong with Rodney was awesome. I love protective!John with a mission. *hugs him* His fear for Rodney (when he finally finds out what's going on) was very realistic. It read like a good ep. *hugs you*
Rodney's choice of his biggest, non-lethal fear? Perfect. Oh...poor Rodney. I think that John will really have his work cut out for him, now. ;)
Thanks so much, sweetie.
*hugs you tight*