Congratulations on getting it finished! And you are more than welcome for the moral support! Anytime!
What I especially enjoyed about this was how well you wrote Rodney's delusions, and how well--and bravely--he responded to them. My favourite part was how he and John were worried about the other being near the window, but for different reasons. I also was impressed with how you blended Rodney's memories and impressions of John and the women together so seamlessly while still keeping each memory distinct. That took a deft touch, and you managed it admirably. Well done. :D Finally, thank you for the happy ending, and how cleverly John got through Rodney's natural mistrust of a situation that seemed too good to be true. I really liked the last line.
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Date: 2008-06-02 12:49 am (UTC)What I especially enjoyed about this was how well you wrote Rodney's delusions, and how well--and bravely--he responded to them. My favourite part was how he and John were worried about the other being near the window, but for different reasons. I also was impressed with how you blended Rodney's memories and impressions of John and the women together so seamlessly while still keeping each memory distinct. That took a deft touch, and you managed it admirably. Well done. :D Finally, thank you for the happy ending, and how cleverly John got through Rodney's natural mistrust of a situation that seemed too good to be true. I really liked the last line.
Leah